So, based on those parameters, I decided to compose two sets of thumbnails that focus more on the sophisticated side of Hungary and one set of thumbnails that aims solely towards the playful counterpart of Hungary. I have yet to make the decision on which direction I'd like to go in. Also, just a side note, the city Pecs is pronounced "Pesh".

My first idea was a rather simplified solution. I chose a typeface that best describes elegance and sophistication, so in this case script style. I wanted to emphasize on the icons more than the type itself for the viewer to first have a glimpse of what a piece of the country's culture looks like before actually realizing what the country it was.

My second set is all about sheer legibility. The typeface I selected is very clean, and very stylish. The icons accompany the type to fortify the very essence of Hungary itself. Also, the typeface resembled a bit of the Gothic era, which fits perfectly in this sense due to the fact that Hungary was once part of Austria. The country shares quite a bit of history with the Germans and Dutch, so I thought it would be appropriate to show just a slight hint of it.

In an attempt to go in a completely different direction, I chose a very playful, and at the same time legible, typeface and this time instead of the two logos working side by side - I wanted to explore the boundaries of how the two logos would work when they were literally stuck together. If any of you out there know what a gypsy is, that would be the perfect word to describe what I was going for here considering the fact that Hungary is almost completely oriented around gypsy festivities. So here, I combined the typeface with the icons themselves. Also, the knocked out letter is meant to be the accented letter in how the city should be pronounced, while the red and the green complete the actual colors of the country's flag. This allowed me to represent the four different logos as almost completely independent and unique from one another. I was not too sure whether this would be a bit of an overkill, but I decided that it was not enough and went ahead and added a small star into each one of the icons to tie them a little bit together (since they are quite different from one another).
The icons themselves are meant to be used universally for other designs. In other words, I plan on using them in all sorts of ways like water marks, backgrounds, patterns etc.
And there you have it. I anxiously await any comments in the near future!
6 comments:
Your last set is a pretty original take. I like the orignality of it. It is interesting. I think I like it best. The idea of it. Maybe limit the colors though.
The first set could work, but the graphics look a bit oddly placed, not like they fit. Plus why the blue? Hungary's colors, if you are using them, are red and green.
I like the red and green of the 2nd one, but the placment does not work for me.
So I think you have a base you can start with, but maybe try some more combinations of type and icons? Maybe try the icons you have chosen, but in a differnt style, not so blocky?
Lea
I love the last set. I have never seen anything like it. I really like what you did with the image and the U and E's. However, I'm not a big fan of the colors, unless those colors are tied to your location. Maybe pick nicer reds and greens. ^_^
Jahaira
Thanks for the cool comments, I appreciate them! The colors might have come out a bit odd since I was working in two different programs and the upload on the site is always quite different from what is originally expected.
the third set is better. The used of "e" is great pocal point. The color need more work because it very gloomy it need light color but overall it great i like it.
Roy
Hey,
I put some new ones up, I wondered if I could get your feedback? If ya have the time :)
Thanks,
Lea
agree again with all.
3rd set.
the black seems heavy though. perhaps a dark value, but not black. color needs work overall.
Lets try handlettering this. Dont let the cpu do the work for you. If its a script face you want, why not script it yourself. This again ads to the "ownable" brand look - knowing that no one else can recreate this type becaue you drew it out. Even the silhouettes seem too digital. Try drawing them with different media, then scanning in and using it in the mark.
great progression and great feedback to others. you really take the time to give critical analysis.
joe
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